I am a Year 6 student at Owairaka District School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 19 and my teacher is Ms Hand.
You had some really good green ideas. I especially like the Aussie M&Ms. I think you should be more clear with the sentence that tells the reader about your learning instead of using 'thing'. You could tell them what the WALT is next time.
Hey Portia,I enjoyed reading your poem because it was FULL of imaginative ideas. That's what makes a describing poem great - so well done.Mr Lyons
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You had some really good green ideas. I especially like the Aussie M&Ms. I think you should be more clear with the sentence that tells the reader about your learning instead of using 'thing'. You could tell them what the WALT is next time.
ReplyDeleteHey Portia,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your poem because it was FULL of imaginative ideas. That's what makes a describing poem great - so well done.
Mr Lyons